I think that there should be a huge dangerous forest that they have to cross through. I also think they should have to go by steam boat over a huge sea but a mail storm should come and it should be a portal to shademoor, and of course thay all get sucked in (even the regular people on the boat). Got it? Sam
Eli i (Benjamin) have just started reading you're book and i have already noticed that it's one of those books that i'm really excited to see what happens next also i like how when he saw the fire in the corner you did'nt just give out the answer like some authors do.
Sincerely nimajneBenjamin p.s i like you're blog lay out!!! pss, had to use my dad's google acct to post - but it is really me.
Sawyer and Haakon are reading today and will share their feedback. AB out.
ReplyDeleteI think that there should be a huge dangerous forest that they have to cross through. I also think they should have to go by steam boat over a huge sea but a mail storm should come and it should be a portal to shademoor, and of course thay all get sucked in (even the regular people on the boat). Got it?
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Eli i (Benjamin) have just started reading you're book and i have already noticed that it's one of those books that i'm really excited to see what happens next also i like how when he saw the fire in the corner you did'nt just give out the answer like some authors do.
ReplyDeleteSincerely nimajneBenjamin p.s i like you're blog lay out!!!
pss, had to use my dad's google acct to post - but it is really me.